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Image size
2634x3880px 1.47 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D80
Shutter Speed
10/25000 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
1000
Date Taken
Mar 22, 2009, 12:56:56 AM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Well, I must say that is a good photo in the sense of the technique. You solved right the light and the resolution is good, the photo looks with a lot of detail and texture.
But when I saw it I feel that something is missing. The color intensity and contrast between the red bricks and the blue sky is nice... but looks without live, and a kinda plain. Something in the composition don't looks good.
I insist there is something missing, like a person, another structure, some clouds in the sky or any element that could break the excessive symmetry in this composition. In a composition the contrast and the asymmetry are important elements that need well balanced and carefully adjusted, of you don't add the enough the artwork will look plain and boring to the sight, and if you add too much then your artwork will look overload messy.

The good of this is see that you have excellent photographic technique, if you improve your composition skills I bet you that you will take awesome photos in no time <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="=D" title="=D (Big Grin)" />